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Author: | xenogenesis [ Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:51 am ] |
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hi these are some lyrics i rote for my band please tell me what u think of them My Mental Death In the death of life I am whole. You see my heart Black as coal. The fires of life Burn in my head No longer on me A burden of lead. My mental death, My mental death With You I am whole My mental death. The ages of time You can pass through You took my soul And built it anew. The cure you put On my soul Has taken my life And made it full. (Chorus) -------------------------------------- The Shadow Of My Life A child screams in an ally His voice small and distant A plague of death approaches He |
Author: | SwellowLuvr [ Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:56 pm ] |
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That's pretty good. I like it a lot because every verse relates back with it, and it also has a dark, ghostly feeling associated with it. |
Author: | xenogenesis [ Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:55 pm ] |
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thanx all good comments help XD |
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