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hi these are some lyrics i rote for my band please tell me what u think of them :D

My Mental Death

In the death of life
I am whole.
You see my heart
Black as coal.

The fires of life
Burn in my head
No longer on me
A burden of lead.

My mental death,
My mental death
With You I am whole
My mental death.

The ages of time
You can pass through
You took my soul
And built it anew.

The cure you put
On my soul
Has taken my life
And made it full.

(Chorus)

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The Shadow Of My Life

A child screams in an ally
His voice small and distant
A plague of death approaches
He

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That's pretty good. I like it a lot because every verse relates back with it, and it also has a dark, ghostly feeling associated with it.

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thanx all good comments help XD

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