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POKEMON:A NEW QUEST
Back story: after the events in pokemon emerald raquaza groundon and kyogre are in hiding weak from there battle in sotoplos team rocket have begun searching for the pokemon and with news of this professer oak calls ash mist and brock and tells them to met him on mirage island
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Episodes:
1.A New Quest
2.Team Rocket
3.Sailing

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Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:25 am
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i tohught mirage island dis and re apeared so how would they pick a time to meet on it....any way sound like a good plot..and good sprtes

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thanks the first eposodes up

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I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason. Is this going to be a funny comic? Just wondering.

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ummmm hey all

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dragonite wrote:
I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason.


^ Pretty much my view.

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Dont worry it will get beter and yes it will get funnier and as for the gramatical mistakes just try to ignore them anyway episode twos up

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You should probably make an effort to fix them instead of trying to make us ignore them =/

I think you're moving too fast. And even though it's a comic, I could care less about your characters. Maybe give them more their own personality.

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[color=#A37AEE]First. I'd like to thank you for mutilating the English language...


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Ok noted is episode3 any beter?

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I don't see episode 3. Could you put a link up?

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Episode Three is a lot better than the first 2. I like the Clamperl when they're closed and then open in the next frame.

My advice is not to have so many characters. I write a few stories for fun now and again and from experience, it's really hard to control them. Perhaps taking Brock and Misty out or giving them smaller roles would be easier.

At the moment, Hiro, Ash and Brendan seem to work fine. I wouldn't include Team Rocket that often, after all, they are total noobs. Oh, and try to fix spelling mistakes, Clamperl only has one 'a' and could you put capitals where they should be? I know it takes more time but it's way worth it as it makes it neater and cooler.

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episode3 link is up

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i think theyre all pretty good. keep it up i look forward to episode 4!


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