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Well, you see, i made 3 evo's for Ponyta: Image Electicorn, Image Pegallion, & Image Vaporse. Then i stuck 'em together to make this: Image! Can your'l plz rate these seperatelly, and tell me what you think of 'em

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Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:35 am
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Rapidash wrote:
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*cough* Ixion *cough* Just looks weird. Nice effort. 7/10

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Nice! Animation rules, and the flames are amazing! 10/10

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Hmm... Interesting idea. Some bits just don't look right though. 8/10

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I'm not so sure about this. It looks a little too basic, and the sprites don't overlap very well. Interesting first attempt. 4/10

Overall, 7.25/10. Very imaginative, but the TC lets it down a bit.

Otherwise, I like it!

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goldenquagsire wrote:

I'm not so sure about this. It looks a little too basic, and the sprites don't overlap very well. Interesting first attempt. 4/10

Overall, 7.25/10. Very imaginative, but the TC lets it down a bit. Otherwise, I like it!


True the TC look weird, have any suggestions on how i can improve it? Plz?

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Sorry for the DP, but i edited the TC, see? Image

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Rapidash wrote:
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Now THAT's good! You improved the sprites and the backround, and I give it a 9.5/10. Next time, try using the Pokemon font for the letters.

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The flaming pegasus one is the best there, good animation, the other two sprites are good, but dont have that special something. The electric is my least favourite.

The newer TC is good except, try to use the pokemon font and the sprites blink wayyyy too fast. Try make them blink every 4-6 seconds.

It's good though. I really like the idea.

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Sat Sep 09, 2006 12:16 am
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Right, well, i don't have Pokemon font...but i will slow down the blinking, i'll either edit this post or make a new one once i'm done.

P.S. I'm gonna enter that Art comp. of yours Rubypoke, and (hopefully) do better, i've been practising! :wink:

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