Thank you for the english lecture, romon1. Though I might add it is not your responsibility to destroy the hopes and dreams of a successful topic in the minds of innocent forum members.
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| Author: | fgdfgd31 [ Fri Aug 13, 2010 3:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | pokemon journey |
hi people im fgd and ill explain this.Im making a journey from Kanto to Sinnoh like i mean a story if your intressted please join in Rules no bad language all pokemon you catch have to have a nickname you do have to say which town you live example Pallet town what starter you got example (Kanto)bulbasaur charmander squirtle (Johto)cyndaquil totodile chikorita (Hoen)mudkip torchic treecko (sinnoh)chimchar piplup turtwig Pokemon must have a gender Pokemon must have a level from 0-100 starters start at level 10 |
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| Author: | Anarchyyeah [ Sun Aug 15, 2010 1:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
just a quick question: what are your thoughts on Bulbasaur? |
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| Author: | fgdfgd31 [ Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
fantastic |
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| Author: | Steel_Eel [ Mon Aug 16, 2010 3:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
You do realize that this is an RP. It belongs in the RP Forum. And It needs to be aproved. Sorry for being a downer. |
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| Author: | fgdfgd31 [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
My Bulbasaure LV.10 was beating up a Lv.13 Evee I then threw my poke ball at it Red was impressed and I caught Evee she looked so happy and evolved into an Espeon WOW! Red said astonished what yea think Red i think you should join my group FGD and i joined |
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| Author: | romon1 [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
This isn't really a story. A story is made of 3 basic elements: plot, characters and setting. I don't know anything about the characters, I don't know where or when it takes place, and nothing really happened. Assuming you want to write a story, you need a clear introduction, which starts us off with all 3 of the aforementioned elements. Introducing your characters and plot will also contribute to your chapter length, which should be significantly longer than a few short lines. Even a couple paragraphs could do it well. You used Red, known as the playable character in Pokemon Red and Blue. Even if your characters are recognizeable by the general Pokemon community, they still need at least minimal development. Red has no set personality traits (other than interest in Pokemon), so we need to know something about him. Preferably, the beginning of the story should be in the first post. Instead, you gave the smallest tidbit of what the story would be about and an application for guest stars (IMO, the story should start before guest stars are accepted). This application even sounds more like a character bio for a roleplay than an application. Considering this, you thought story when you really wanted a roleplay. Though, the only differences between a story and roleplay are that the participants (posters) take an active role in the story, and that roleplay is written by said participants. Even then, roleplay requires people to advance the plot in their writings. |
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| Author: | ArcaNineTales [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
Thank you for the english lecture, romon1. Though I might add it is not your responsibility to destroy the hopes and dreams of a successful topic in the minds of innocent forum members.
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| Author: | Steel_Eel [ Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
ArcaNineTales wrote: to destroy the hopes and dreams of a successful topic in the minds of innocent forum members. Succcessful... 
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| Author: | fgdfgd31 [ Wed Aug 18, 2010 2:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
its an example |
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| Author: | salamence47 [ Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: pokemon journey |
lol, yeah! he just want to add that and just an example Steel_Eel ! 
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