i agree with crimson too.

but i have no Problem with reading i am one of the best readers in my school.

like i read all the golden compass book in three day 2 hours a day so

i know about books.

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAArlingk, calm down there...

No one is attacking your skills, but I am telling you as a professional who knows this industry, it is going to take you at leats seven years before you get anywhere at all. I am twenty and can finally throw money around like a fat kid in a cake store, but I was exactly like you when I was thirteen.

Don't get your hopes up, it is going to take you a very long time. You won't be the cool kid in school who gets dropped off in a limo because you made heaps of money on a book, it doesn't happen. Ever.

Calm down, take the advice of Crimson, in my opinion Crimson is a phenominally adept critic and a promising writer, listen to the advice you've been offered and slow down.

Start writing your story and listen to what people have to say, don't worry about getting input before you start, just go. Open your mouth, put your pencil down your throat and spew up a mess of story vomit. My favourite are the chunky ones.

Love and pie.

so anyway i am writing my story right now tell me if you like it after!