HELP! I need rating fast! Need to win!

@ Lefties

Hidden Power- Grass
Hyper beam
Thunder wave
Thunderbolt

@ Lefties

Counter
Ice beam
Mirror Coat
Surf

@ Lefties

Cross Chop
Flame Thrower
Hidden Power- Grass
Thunderpunch

@ Lefties

Frustaion
Ingrain
Solar beam
Sunny Day

@ Lefties

Aerial ace
Double Edge
Earthquake
Rock Slide

@ Lefties

Calm Mind
Hidden Power-Dark
Calm Mind
Psychic

HoD : Comin now

Jolteon: Attract/Substitute > Hyper Beam.

Blastoise: If you are "noobish" enough to use blastoise, you are too noobish to use prediction moves. Switch out counter and mirror coat for rapid spin (spikes problem) and Earthquake/HP Dark/HP Electric

Magmar - Again, fire types are bad to have. Weaknesses to the most common moves kill them (Eq, Rock Slide, Surf). Magmar sort of combats the problems, in that it gets confuse ray and thunder punch. C-ray > Cross Chop. Unless you have a t-tar problem.

Lol, Meganium. Venusaur is better. But, if you must, leech seed > ingrain, and razor leaf/magical leaf/HP Grass > solar beam. Stun Spore/toxic > frustration. Synthesis/Counter/Reflect/LightScreen > Sunny Day

Aerodactyl - @Choice Band. HP Flying > Aerial Ace. make sure to give jolly nature 252 Speed EVs, and the DV spread of 30 HP, 30 Atk, 30 Def, 31 Speed, 30 SAtk, 30 SDef. You need a fast aerodactyl, trust me.

Mr. Mime - you have 2 calm minds. switch out one for trick, and give a choice band for an item. lead with this.

Ok. Thank you.



PS: Blastoise is not noobish.

here goes...

@ iapapa berry

aerial ace
mega kick
slash
solar beam

@ charcoal

extremespeed
fire blast
heat wave
hyper beam

@ focus band

giga drain
hidden power (dark)
hyper beam
solar beam

@ figy berry

blizzard
double-edge
hydro pump
hyper beam

@ mago berry

moonlight
shadow ball
toxic
substitute

@ figy berry

double-edge
hidden power (dark)
hyper beam
psychic

i know a lot of improvement could be made.

This is my main team... it really sucks for some reason.

When ever I exported to text it gave me a blank txt file. So now I have to type it all out.

@lefties
Nature: Calm (+Sp. Def -Atk)
EVs: 180 HP, 180 Def, 100 Sp. Atk, 40 Sp. Def
Heal Bell
Leech Seed
Psychic
Recover

@lefties
Nature: relaxed (+def -Spd)
EVs: 180 HP, 104 Atk, 96 Def, 128 Sp. Atk
Spikes
Rapid Spin
Explosion
Zap Cannon

I thought the zap cannon set was a cool idea. I can afford the misses cuz of its high Def. It so laughs at skarm.

@ lefties
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 HP, 58 Def, 64 Sp. Atk, 136 Sp. Def
Ice Beam
Roar
Rest
Calm Mind

My tank... most people expect surf on this guy so Ice beam laughs at dragons, grass, etc.

@ Choice Band
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk, 252 Spd, 4 HP
EQ
Rock Slide
Sludge Bomb
Return

@ choice band
Nature: Modest
EVs: 252 Sp. Atk, 252 Spd, 4 HP
Psychic
Fire Punch
Trick
Calm mind

Think of CMs and a 405 sp. atk...

@ lefties
Nature: adament
EVs: 76 HP, 220 atk, 136 Def, 76 Sp. Def
Body Slam
Shadow Ball
Rest
Sleep Talk

I used to have Curse instead of Sleep Talk but I was getting killed by roar. This guy is just awesome. Shadow Ball has KO'd so many Gengars its not even funny.

im working on a new team and would appreciate any suggestions. especially in terms of which common Pokemon my team is weak against.

@ Leftovers
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 108 HP / 78 Atk / 108 Def / 196 SAtk / 20 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Earthquake
- Ice Beam
- Psychic
- Rapid Spin

to try and counter two of the most common openers - salamence and jolty. i like psychic there to shock gengars, and i dont like the idea of explosion (besides my gengar has destiny bond which can sometimes do the trick).

(M) @ Leftovers ** Rex
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 84 HP / 252 Atk / 172 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

thinking of maybe changing hp to bug. still kills ludicolo, but works better on celebi

(M) @ Leftovers ** Ghost
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Destiny Bond
- Fire Punch
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Thunderbolt

hp(grass) for swampert etc. this is the one i am most uncertain about. i like it to be very fast to beat other gengars if necessary. any ideas?

(M) @ Leftovers ** Purple Haze
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP / 252 Def / 68 SAtk
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Haze
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Wish

the jury is out on this one too. other moves i would like to have include substitute and baton pass. but it does make a good dragon stopper. i would also like a bit more special defence, but at what expence?

(M) @ Leftovers ** Blade
Trait: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 40 Atk / 120 Def / 96 SDef
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Spikes
- Substitute
- Whirlwind

pretty standard i think

(F) @ Leftovers ** Fortuna
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Aromatherapy
- Seismic Toss
- Softboiled
- Thunder Wave

pretty standard. sp-def EVs instead of hp because its not gonna survive a heck of a lot more attacking moves with 62 extra HP. extra hp just plays right into leech-seeders hands. im also thinking of maybe changing softboiled for wish, and that might free up a slot for vapy.

i would love some suggestions. if this team works well, it works VERY well. if it doesnt work well, then it crashes reasonably hard. there are also many types which are supereffective against two or more team members.

@Leftovers
Adamant 460 ATK 237 DEF 299 SPD 203 SA 166 SD
Trait:Truant
Focus Punch
Return
Earthquake
Hyper Beam(When return doesn't do the job)

@Leftovers
Modest 203 ATK 250 DEF 222 SPD 317 SA 250 SD
Trait:Swift Swim
Double Team
Ice Beam
Surf
Rain Dance(all i could think of for a fourth move)

@Leftovers
Quiet 306 ATK 300 DEF 158 SPD 317 SA 250 SD
Trait:Clear Body
Aerial Ace
Meteor Mash
Psychic
Earthquake

@Choice Band
Adamant 394 ATK 234 DEF 146 SPD 149 SA 232 SD
Trait:Guts
Cross Chop
Rock Slide
Earthquake
Bulk Up

@Leftovers
Quiet 300 ATK 230 DEF 203 SPD 275 SA 231 SD
Trait:Intimidate
Aerial Ace
Flamethower
Extremespeed
Double Team

@Leftovers
Hasty 306 ATK 202 DEF 265 SPD 318 SA 224 SD
Trait:Intimidate
Dragon Claw
Flamethower
Hidden Power Flying
Hydro Pump

This is my regular every-day team no specifics

i was really offended by how you talked about my slaking and for some reason when i use focus punch as long as i don't get attacked focus punch only takes 1 turn.so i my NOT changing that.
I have OHKO many a skarmory with him
so DON'T flame me!!!!

Give me 1 reason why i should give my kingdra substitute

That guy has really no understanding.. Next time, go to Team Builder -> Export to text.

Sorry if you feel offended, I didn't mean to insult you.

Slakings have the abilty "Truant" which makes it possible to attack in 2 turns. Focus Punch can't catch Skarm on switch because it takes 4 turns:

Turn 1- Slaking is loafing around.
Turn 2- Slaking is tightning its focus.
Turn 3- Slaking is loafing around.
Turn 4- Slaking used Focus Punch!

And bout Kingdra, it has bad defenses. I agree, it's only weakness is Dragon but it gets 3HKO'ed by STABed Rock Slide without any boosts.

Slaking's Truant ability doesn't work like that at all. Provided it doesn't get hit in the second turn by the opposing Pokemon, Slaking will attack with Focus Punch during Turn 2. Of course, if you do happen to get hit, you will have sacrificed three turns in a row.

Also, you should note that these are only suggested critisisms from others, so if you do not wish to alter your movesets and such then you don't have to. I think your team is quite alright as it is, [I quite like mixed sweeper sets on those that usually specialize in only either physical or special] so I'll leave my comments at that. I might like to add Double Team is generally frowned down upon in competitive play, as it turns winning into a matter of luck over skill, so I would suggest filling that with another move suggested above.

A Netbattle team that I made needs serious work, it keeps losing.

1.){salamence}
Item:Liechi Berry
Nature:Adamant
EV's: 20 HP, 252 Attk, 48 Def, 142 Spd, 48 Sp. Def

-Dragon Dance
-Earthquake
-HP Flying
-Rock Slide

2.){ho-oh}
Item:Leftovers
Nature:Modest
EV's: 188 HP, 120 Def, 202 Sp. Attk

-Calm Mind
-Recover
-Sacred Fire
-Thunderbolt

3.){feraligatr}
Item:Leftovers
Nature:Gentle
EV's: 20 HP, 44 Attk, 80 Def, 72 Spd, 252 Sp. Attk, 40 Sp. Def

-Earthquake
-Ice Punch
-Rock Slide
-Surf

4.){deoxys} (Defense Form)
Item:Leftovers
Nature:Hardy
EV's: 252 HP, 144 Def, 96 Sp. Attk, 16 Sp. Def

-Calm Mind
-Ice Beam
-Thunderbolt
-Recover

5.){tyranitar}
Item:Leftovers
Nature:Naughty
EV's: 4 HP, 252 Attk, 252 Spd

-Aerial Ace
-Dragon dance
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide

6.){nidoking}
Item:Leftovers
Nature:Lonely
EV's: 4 HP, 80 Attk, 220 Spd, 204 Sp. Attk

-Earthquake
-Ice Beam
-Megahorn
-Thunderbolt

I know this team needs help because I am missing parts a basic team needs, and I can't find out what they are.

considering that this has ho-oh and would be considered an "uber team" because of it (the uber metagame which means all pokemon. ou means that certain pokemon arent allowed and then it narrows down to UU). I suggest that you consider this when building a team:

2 sweepers
2 walls
2 support

sweepers- pokemon that may or may not set up (like CBers) that are meant to go through opposing teams with relative ease before fainting, like curselax.

walls - pokemon that are meant to absorb hits

support - pokemon that help your team out with wish, reflect, light screen, and other moves like that.

all of these can mix, like skarmory can both support by setting up spikes and phazing, and it can wall because of its good resistances and great defensive power, or snorlax, which can both special wall and set up. think about the types of pokemon that you have and the commonly seen pokemon.

Salamence (M) @ Choice Band
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 76 Atk / 252 Spd / 180 SAtk
Lonely Nature (+Atk, -Def)
- Earthquake
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Rock Slide

Standard CBmence. Nothing to see here.

Starmie @ Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 236 HP / 216 Spd / 56 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Rapid Spin
- Recover
- Surf
- Thunderbolt

Rapid spinning Starmie that can simaltaneously blow away spikes and kill Skarm.

Tyranitar (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 88 HP / 252 Atk / 168 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Taunt

Standard DDtar. Always nice to have Taunt around.

Hypno (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Insomnia
EVs: 252 HP / 136 Def / 120 Spd
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Safeguard
- Seismic Toss
- Thunder Wave
- Wish

Amazing support. Wish helps out the rest of the team as do Safeguard and T-Wave.

Rapidash (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Run Away
EVs: 4 HP / 1 Atk / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 1 SDef
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Flamethrower
- Hypnosis
- Solar Beam
- Sunny Day

No-one really knows how much potential this guy has. Great for surprising the ever popular Swampert switch-in.

Magneton @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 184 HP / 104 Spd / 220 SAtk
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Substitute
- Thunder Wave
- Thunderbolt

If Starmie doesn't get the job done, this guy will. Also serves as a nice speical sweeper.

Which is also my RP Team

Modest@
Psychic
Calm Mind
Surf
Ice Beam

Mild@
Calm Mind
Cosmic Power
Psychic
Thunderbolt

Hasty@
(Thunder) Maybe Zap Cannon/LockOn
Thunderbolt
Thuder Wave
Sonic Beam

Adamant@ Max Out Atk
Swords Dance
Bonemarang
Bonerush
Hidden Power (Bug)

Lonely
Sludge Bomb
Crunch
Hidden Power (Fire)
Toxic

Mild@
Sunny Day
Solarbeam
Double-Edge
Sleep Powder

Rash@
Hypnosis
Nightmare
Psychic
Dream Eater

This thread is for providing constructive criticism. Cut out the elitist crap or you will be permanently banned from posting in this thread.

don't know how to export to text and then paste
@Leftovers
252 Sp.Atk 20 Hp 84 Def 152 Sp.Def Modest nature Marval Scale
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Hypnosis

@Leftovers
252 Hp 252 Sp.Def 4 Atk Adamant nature Levitate
Poison Gas
Sludge Bomb
Will-O-Wisp
Pain Split

@Leftovers
252 Atk 16 Def 240 Sp.Def Clear Body
Meteor Mash
Earthquake
Agility
Explosion

@Leftovers
252 Atk 128 Sp.Def 128 Def Adamant nature Inner Focus
Sludge Bomb
Confuse Ray
Shadow Ball
Hidden Power Flying

@Leftovers
252 Sp.Def 236 Sp.Def 20 Hp Modest nature Own Tempo
Psych Up
Psychic
Ice Beam
Surf

@Choice Band
252 Atk 122 Sp.Def 136 Def Adamant nature Rock Head
Earthquake
Hidden Power Flying
Rock Slide
Double-Edge

Remember this is a Double Battle Team
My strategy is to use poison gas on milotic so marval scale activates.
Now milotic should have 324 Def Recover and leftovers will aid in the recovery from the poison gas
Slowbro is a tank
aerodactyl is my physical sweeper
metagross is backup
[/list]

The stuff I changed is in bold-

first team i ever made for netbattle and i cant seem to win
help please

umbreon @ leftovers
wish
toxic
baton pass
mean look

salamance @leftovers
areial ace
steel wing
earthquake
dragon dance

gardevior @leftovers
calm mind
thunderbolt
will-o-wisp
psychic

skarmory @leftovers
drill peck
toxic
roar
spikes

blastoise @leftovers
surf
ice beam
earthquake
haze

golem @leftovers
earthquake
focus punch
rock slide
explosion

Here goes...
Manectric (M) @ Petaya Berry ** Pawn
Trait: Static
EVs: 44 HP / 220 Spd / 244 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Crunch
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt

Flygon (M) @ Choice Band ** Knight
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Ghost]
- Quick Attack
- Rock Slide

Blaziken (M) @ Leftovers ** Bishop
Trait: Blaze
EVs: 228 Atk / 148 Spd / 132 SAtk
Naughty Nature (+Atk, -SDef)
- Fire Blast
- Rock Slide
- Sky Uppercut
- Swords Dance

Metagross @ Leftovers ** Rook
Trait: Clear Body
EVs: 96 HP / 252 Atk / 72 Def / 90 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Agility
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Meteor Mash

Kyogre @ Leftovers ** Queen
Trait: Drizzle
EVs: 6 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Calm Mind
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Thunder

Rayquaza @ Leftovers ** King
Trait: Air Lock
EVs: 12 HP / 252 Atk / 244 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Flying]
- Thunderbolt

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