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Welcome to the strangest pokemon adventure of all time. Enjoy!

Chapter 1: The fools awake


"Come on, crazy fools, get up already! That crazy professor's waitin' for ya!" Mr. T shouted up the stairs.


Sorry this is taking so long, I'm using a PS3 to type. I'll do some more when I get home. :wink:

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Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:46 am
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As soon as I saw 'Mr. T,' I hit the back button.

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dude, no offense but this is going to go no where. 0/10 anything Pokémon that has Mr.t will defiantly NOT mix

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A flea and fly in a flue, Were imprisoned so what could they do? Said the flea let us fly. Said the fly let us flee. So they flew through a flaw in the flue.


Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:27 am
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We've had something like this before, it was not received well. People will probably get very angry at you if you continue. My advice: stop.

EDIT: Following two posts eliminates "probably".

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Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:55 pm
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For this atrocity, in my eyes you cannot die soon or violently enough. This may seem harsh and I don't want to come over as cruel but unfortunately that's what I am.


Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:47 pm
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you should rename it ''the extremely repulsive uninteresting adventures (it's retarded)
seriously

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A flea and fly in a flue, Were imprisoned so what could they do? Said the flea let us fly. Said the fly let us flee. So they flew through a flaw in the flue.


Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:53 pm
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Go read the adventures of totodile.

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1) Don't use a PS3 to type if all you can manage is a sentence or so.
2) Read: books. Learn what "good" fiction is. Don't get me wrong, I've read stuff that I think is horribly written, but it's a start.
3) Comedy is one of the hardest genres to write. Writing random crap isn't going to make it funny or good.
4) Practice makes perfect. Take a step away from "comedy" and practice writing short stories: drabbles, one-shots, etc.

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example: I am writing on my PSP at this time and I learned after multiple posts that it gets quite anoying. Here is an example of how much room your ps3 allows 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 123456789 987456321 123654789 987456321 123654789 987456321 123654789 987456321 123654789 1

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A flea and fly in a flue, Were imprisoned so what could they do? Said the flea let us fly. Said the fly let us flee. So they flew through a flaw in the flue.


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